How Can I Make It Better? - Ways to Revise
evision
requires time. Think of the Beatles working in the studio day
after day to add layers of sound to their classic songs. Starting
sooner will give you the time to come back to a draft and work
on it again using these strategies:
- To create a fresh perspective on your draft, try outlining
after you have completed a draft. Simply number each
paragraph and create a list of the main ideas paragraph by paragraph
on a separate piece of paper.
- To develop a strong sense of what you want to say, double
check your thesis: do still believe it or need revise it? Once
you have determined a thesis, compare the outline created from
your draft. Do you need to add, delete, or re-order any parts
to support thesis?
- To create the appropriate tone, consider the requirements
of your assignment (summary, analysis, an argument, etc.) and
the audience you want to reach (readers who share your expertise,
know little about your topic, or disagree with your opinion,
etc.)