Technology Friend Or Foe?
By: Samantha DelConte

16% of 8-18 Year-Olds have Cell Phones!
We Use Technology about 7.5 Hours a Day!
Students are Using These Acronyms in Their School Work!
In today’s society
technology can be bittersweet. Now with all these smart phones,
iPods, iPads, and laptops we can receive information faster then we
ever had before. We are constantly checking our Facebook profiles or
our Twitter accounts; this makes Americans always connected to each
other. The children of this generation are spending too much time on
technology then the generations before. With all these forms of
technology students writing is being affected. Also, technology is
affecting social skills in both a positive and negative way.
With social networking websites like MySpace,
Facebook, and Twitter people can be in contact with each other all
throughout the day on their smart phones, iPods and iPads with out
having to text or email each other. Arnold James a 16-year-old student
said this quote when asked about not using his cell phone, “It would
probably be like a drug addicts feel when they are getting off drugs”
(Hartford Currant). Children that have cell phone are “hooked” on them.
Technology has become addicting, Melinda Badiak from Nottingham,
Maryland says this about her 14, six, and two year old children “our
oldest has an IPod, which is always playing music, accessing Facebook
or used for games [.] Our [six] year old is an early riser, so instead
of waking everyone else, he huddles under the covers and plays his
Nintendo DS till it’s time to get ready for school. Even the [two] year
old has a LeapPad Learning System that, while educational, is
electronic”(Hartford Current). Children of this generation are addicted
to their electronic devices; some of them cannot put them down. Even
adults are within arms length of their BlackBerry’s or iPhones through
out the day.
Individuals between the ages of eight and 18 are on some form of
technology throughout the day. According to the Kaiser Family
Foundation, a discovery was made that on average individuals between
ages eight and 18 are using technology about seven and a half hours.
Also individuals at these ages have learned to multitask with these
devices. They have managed to fit about ten hours and 45 minuets in
these seven hours by multitasking. (Kaiser Family Foundation)
Individuals are listening to music, texting, and are on Facebook all at
the same time and are conscious of everything they are doing with these
forms of technology. It is even noticed in younger children due to the
use of electronic hand held gamin devices. Children are constantly
playing on these throughout the day. Not only did the Kaiser study find
how often individuals are on technology but “over the past five years
cell phone ownership among [eight] to 18 year olds has increased from
39 percent to 66 percent, while iPods and MP3 player ownership has
increased from 18 percent to 79 percent” (Hartford Currant). Another
study that took place in 2008 by the Pew Internet and American Life
project found that “cell phone ownership among youngsters ages 12-17
increased from 45 percent in 2004 to 71 percent in 2008” (Hartford
Currant). These are dramatic increases that have happened over the past
few years.
Student’s skills in writing are starting to
deteriorate. Texting acronyms have been showing up more and more in
students writing. Mrs. Wooden an English teacher at Cedarville
High School says, “They take vowels out of words because that’s what
they are used to doing, they don’t capitalize words they don’t
punctuate sentences. They just add extra spaces at the end. They use
abbreviations”(KMFS). She also mentions in the article Texting’s
terrible Impact on Students’ Writing that its mostly in hand written
work because when typing on the computer programs such as word with
auto correct mistakes like this. This article also has points of view
from students in this English class. Some state that when they get
papers back and see the “texting lingo” they have written they are
surprised with themselves that they put them in, not realizing they did
in the first place. Mrs. Wooden also mentions that she believes
social networking sites such as Facebook, MySpace and Instant Messenger
(AIM), are major factors in this problem for student writing.
In addition to Facebook, MySpace, Twitter, AIM
and, Email texting is a big factor in our communication. According to a
survey research project Hillyer students do not use correct grammar
while texting. Correct grammar is defined as using complete sentences
and correct punctuation in full sentences. When taking a survey of ten
Hillyer freshmen, five boys and five girls, three of them used correct
grammar while texting and seven of them did not. When surveying Hillyer
sophomores, five girls and five boys, four of them said they used
correct grammar while texting and six of them said no. Overall out of
the 20 students that were surveyed seven of them used correct grammar
while texting and 13 of them did not. Could texting be another link to
our poor communication skills? If we are not texting correctly how
could we be communicating correctly with each other?
However technology is not all bad. There are some positive points to
this argument; technology is keeping Americans in touch with people
faster then ever before. Now individuals can all stay connected on
social networking programs life Facebook and MySpace. Even having a
cell phone lets the user receive information faster by text message.
According to the New York Times teenagers between the ages of 12 and 17
send between 50 and 100 text messages a day. Having social networks
like Facebook and MySpace has allowed shy children to interact with
other children their age with out being shy to speak to them. Robert
Wilson the father of Andy Wilson and 11-year-old from Atlanta says this
about his son Facebook page, “For Evan, the No. 1 reason is it’s
helping him come out of his shell and develop his social skills that he
wasn’t learning because he’s so shy” (New York Times). Helping shy
individuals come would be a positive aspect of technology.
In addition there are some negative points to this
argument as well. The addiction that one has with their technology is
overwhelming. Individuals are constantly logged on to Facebook, Twitter
and MySpace with their smart phones. Individuals are so involved in
their virtual world that they are not present in reality. This quote
from the New York Times shows the debate over technology, “The question
on researchers’ minds is whether all that texting, instant messaging
and online social networking allows children to become more connected
and supportive of their friends- or whether the quality of their
interactions is diminished without the intimacy and emotional give and
take of regular, extended face-to-face time.” This generation is more
concerned with their technology then ever before. A supporting quote
about this generation says, “Those hours spent on the family princess
phone or hanging out with pals in the neighborhood after school
vanished long ago. But now, even chatting on the cell phone or via
e-mail is passé” (The New York Times). Children are not outside anymore
spending time with other children they are inside with their computer
games, or video game, or texting.
Additionally there are many ways that I use
technology. I for one use technology everyday. I use my Blackberry to
get my school emails and to talk to my family and friends. I use
Facebook to connect with old friends from high school and from my child
hood camp experiences, along with friends from collage that. I also use
Facebook in my Sociology class. We use a Facebook group to keep in
contact with everyone and know what is going on in the recent class. As
a collage student I use Facebook a lot weather it be for connecting
with friends getting information from class or sending Facebook emails
from other classmates for study information or class notes that were
missed. I also have a twitter account that I tweet with all the time. I
have over a thousand tweets and have been tweeting since November 2010.
I would have to say that I am not addicted to my Facebook social
networking but I am addicted to twitter, I have over a thousand tweets
in a little over a year. I am also in arms reach of my blackberry at
all times of the day. In my opinion I think that our generation is more
addicted to technology then others after before us.
Although technology is both good and bad for many of
the reasons that have been stated but children in this generation are
so addicted to their technology that I feel as if they are missing out
on fun things that I as a young child got to enjoy throughout my
childhood. I can always remember coming home from school and going
outside to play tag with my neighbors or other games with my neighbor
hood friends. Now as I look outside throughout my town I see barely any
children playing out side with each other. My eleven-year-old cousin is
more concerned with beating the next level in his Xbox game then
hanging out outside with his friends. Children of this generation are
missing out on critical fun things that generations before them and
technology is to blame!
Overall the way that society today uses technology
is bitter sweet. Between all the different smart phones, iPod, iPads,
laptops and social networking site Americans are constantly connected
to each other. Children of this generation and the generation before
are spending too much time on technology then generations before them.
With all these forms of technology students writing is being affected.
Also, technology is affecting social skills in a positive and negative
way. Children of this generation is also missing out on the fun things
that I used to do as a kid. After hearing the facts and my opinion the
negative aspects of this argument out shine the positive aspects of the
argument for technology to be good for us. Technology is slowly killing
our communication. I hope that you agree as much as I do after
listening to the facts.